tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post943541481079366166..comments2023-04-05T04:48:35.529-06:00Comments on Poet...maybe?: Musca domesticaWyoming Diva/SShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11542787549118166216noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-25844689563933713972013-10-10T06:35:20.580-06:002013-10-10T06:35:20.580-06:00... I love my fly swatter (sorry)... I love my fly swatter (sorry)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-76726687338960077482013-10-09T20:55:38.565-06:002013-10-09T20:55:38.565-06:00Oh my the fly on a suicide mission! So creative! ...Oh my the fly on a suicide mission! So creative! Wonderful descriptions in this. thanks for posting.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-11362534913990462112013-10-09T18:06:06.887-06:002013-10-09T18:06:06.887-06:00Yes, excellent third person point of view, uninvol...Yes, excellent third person point of view, uninvolved but so descriptive. I could relate to the bookkeeper lady driven to distraction by the fly. I've written on Facebook about houseflies and fruit flies driving me crazy this past week.<br />K<br />Kay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-72233978159264465902013-10-09T16:32:01.701-06:002013-10-09T16:32:01.701-06:00Oh my, I certainly wouldn't want to be this fl...Oh my, I certainly wouldn't want to be this fly on the wall. Great take on the prompt!!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-75872613417315076572013-10-09T15:53:50.753-06:002013-10-09T15:53:50.753-06:00Well, I can't be really sympathetic about a ba...Well, I can't be really sympathetic about a bashed fly. But, you certainly did a great job with your poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-732927455385125192013-10-09T13:37:38.722-06:002013-10-09T13:37:38.722-06:00Oy, a murder in cold blood on a wednesday morning....Oy, a murder in cold blood on a wednesday morning. I am loving all of these poems - great fun! (except for the fly, the worm and the toad, hee hee.)Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-59418341766074529092013-10-09T11:59:24.941-06:002013-10-09T11:59:24.941-06:00I'm really enjoying these poems through from t...I'm really enjoying these poems through from the view of an animal/insect. Is it bad that I laughed at "suddenly his guts crash through his small brain".Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-88274641487055109542013-10-09T11:39:35.344-06:002013-10-09T11:39:35.344-06:00Wonderful third person view without an anthropomor...Wonderful third person view without an anthropomorphic stance. Powerful detail led me to see the fly like a child playing. I remember my mom wishing she had a giant swatter to take care of the motorcycles buzzing our house all day. I'm so very happy children are not usually treated like flies, tho some child abuse may be traced to this ...Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-88721879453935250672013-10-09T11:39:07.933-06:002013-10-09T11:39:07.933-06:00Nicely depicted journey Nicely depicted journey Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.com