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Listening for the thunderous
sound of feet on the porch
seconds after the car door slams,
I only hear the wind chimes.
Longing for the loud
messy tornado of you
wrestling the dog on the
scarily clean floor.
(Submitted for Thursday Poets Rally, Week 71, 8-22-12)
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ReplyDeleteSense of a new change in life -- reminiscing with memories of "just one more time!" Nicely done!
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Aww, as a college student this makes me sad. At least my parents still have my youngest sister around. And though we're not around physically, we keep in regular contact. Well-written, thanks!
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ReplyDeleteI too find this somewhat sad. It's only when they're gone that you realize how much you love them. Nicely penned! I like your imagery too. Thanks for sharing.
The Naked Wind
inspiring piece.
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excellent.
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Thanks for being part of Thursday Poets Rally and hope to see you continued support …your input is valued…
We are giving you the perfect poet award for week 71 today, enjoy!
If you take it, please nominate another poet in your poem post, and leave your acceptance link under our award post, thank you in advance!
Happy End of August! Have A Grand September Ahead!
Looking forward to seeing you in the rally next time again!
Cheers!
Great images
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