tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post8660239619906225789..comments2023-04-05T04:48:35.529-06:00Comments on Poet...maybe?: SquareWyoming Diva/SShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11542787549118166216noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-66943806759442162482011-07-15T06:22:51.715-06:002011-07-15T06:22:51.715-06:00Nicely done. I'm amazed at the amount of good...Nicely done. I'm amazed at the amount of good poetry written in blogs nowadays. So many people with quiet talent.California Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12582691517303132274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-4564792803137852292011-07-14T18:45:51.735-06:002011-07-14T18:45:51.735-06:00Thinking oneself out of ones own square is often t...Thinking oneself out of ones own square is often therapetic.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-31849671394781807912011-07-14T16:08:05.212-06:002011-07-14T16:08:05.212-06:00Liked suggestion. Done!Liked suggestion. Done!WyomingDivahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14347884469260061872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-14752401558502117912011-07-14T14:50:44.993-06:002011-07-14T14:50:44.993-06:00Can relate to this. Superb versifying, esp. the l...Can relate to this. Superb versifying, esp. the lines: ". . . I don't perceive that you are completely honest yet."<br /><br />That applies to so many people around me right now.<br /><br />One suggestion: lose the last two lines - it's superfluous, too telling/overkill - let the reader realize this in a sublime manner, and it feels. . . well, more deliciously realized and resounding. =)<br /><br />What does it taste like? It's different for each person, ennit? ;PSteve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.com