tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post2692358471333732746..comments2023-04-05T04:48:35.529-06:00Comments on Poet...maybe?: Hope for Adam and EveWyoming Diva/SShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11542787549118166216noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-28155967640935217762011-08-23T10:59:00.399-06:002011-08-23T10:59:00.399-06:00real and powerful.real and powerful.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-20050568492457773802011-08-23T07:10:36.476-06:002011-08-23T07:10:36.476-06:00very real ...all relationships hit a wall its how ...very real ...all relationships hit a wall its how we deal with it that matters ....great poem thank youAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-84752777458070634092011-08-22T13:08:24.012-06:002011-08-22T13:08:24.012-06:00"slithering dishonesty." Great line. I l..."slithering dishonesty." Great line. I love the optimism, the reality, in this write. : )Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-72186877559018791812011-08-22T11:59:54.586-06:002011-08-22T11:59:54.586-06:00Great and interesting take on the prompt. I applau...Great and interesting take on the prompt. I applaud its emotional honesty.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-70139653574657224242011-08-22T11:19:37.611-06:002011-08-22T11:19:37.611-06:00this is great.
reflective and smart.
:)this is great.<br />reflective and smart.<br /><br />:)Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-74785103160840290132011-08-22T10:20:17.528-06:002011-08-22T10:20:17.528-06:00Very nice modern turn on innocence lost, and rebui...Very nice modern turn on innocence lost, and rebuilding a relationship.<br />I like<br /> "...with eyes clear and the <br />knowledge of each other's <br />good and evil <br />clearly to mind." <br />No one is perfect, it's in the knowledge and acceptance of the other's faults that a relationship truly can work.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-17083269497537229932011-08-22T06:57:10.767-06:002011-08-22T06:57:10.767-06:00nice Piece... Second chances on relationships. I d...nice Piece... Second chances on relationships. I don't think I could ever do that but applaud those that can make it work. Love the Eden line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-13956694475069803092011-08-22T05:02:04.939-06:002011-08-22T05:02:04.939-06:00This is wonderful. I love what you've done wit...This is wonderful. I love what you've done with the story. So well told, too. <br /><br />Here is my offering for this first Gooseberry Garden picnic: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/this-eden/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-46595781471392283222011-08-21T20:36:58.088-06:002011-08-21T20:36:58.088-06:00nice ending...it is never easy but if we hold each...nice ending...it is never easy but if we hold each other along the journey, it can work!!!<br />Here's my offering: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/vanished/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com