tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post2116413590111616810..comments2023-04-05T04:48:35.529-06:00Comments on Poet...maybe?: Merry-go-roundWyoming Diva/SShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11542787549118166216noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-86136396798301255592011-07-15T03:54:30.339-06:002011-07-15T03:54:30.339-06:00Oh wow this is an incredible metaphor and I can ve...Oh wow this is an incredible metaphor and I can very much relate, I seem to be caught up in this insanity right nowAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-80943614407338329142011-07-14T16:44:54.338-06:002011-07-14T16:44:54.338-06:00I agree about the enjambment. I have vertigo, time...I agree about the enjambment. I have vertigo, time to get off. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-89341905067399807172011-07-14T12:37:04.117-06:002011-07-14T12:37:04.117-06:00I often refer to the merry-go-round as the "c...I often refer to the merry-go-round as the "crazy-go-round."<br /><br />Nice job! Happy Rally<br /><br />Peggy<br />http://serendipitysmiles.com/2011/07/03/i-am/Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848194956406520874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-31203030165692890742011-07-14T10:17:47.717-06:002011-07-14T10:17:47.717-06:00I loved the way you have brought merry go round to...I loved the way you have brought merry go round to the reality of life... and in the end, when you brought the 'Children' in the verse, it created a great imagery... lovely write...<br /><br />I liked your lines..<br />'How did I reach this point where I thought<br />the merry-go-round of addiction was life, and<br />not simply a carnival distraction,'<br />So true...<br /><br /><br />Thanks for joining in Poetry Potluck WK 43, which I am hosting for the first time this week. hope you have enjoyed it... and I look forward to your participation next week...too<br /><br />Shashi<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/07/whispers-cuckoos-song-and-smell-of-love.html<br />At Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-90422686865404837422011-07-14T04:15:38.148-06:002011-07-14T04:15:38.148-06:00Great imagery. Loved the poem.Great imagery. Loved the poem.Jack Edwards Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11813177533690643652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-31858257221388046942011-07-14T00:13:57.924-06:002011-07-14T00:13:57.924-06:00Still like it! Still like it a lot! *big smile*Still like it! Still like it a lot! *big smile*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-68614477223707176022011-07-13T20:06:26.603-06:002011-07-13T20:06:26.603-06:00You've chosen the perfect metaphor for this li...You've chosen the perfect metaphor for this life we lead. Your words resonate and I'm listening.<br />Following your blog,<br />Rosie@travel-i-talesRosie Ganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10154191472533578209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-40727661797911367102011-07-13T19:57:06.699-06:002011-07-13T19:57:06.699-06:00The piece makes me dizzy reading it with the enjam...The piece makes me dizzy reading it with the enjambed lines; I really like how you have used language to evoke that feeling, then of getting off, getting bearings at the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-33756512800356968072011-07-13T18:57:15.002-06:002011-07-13T18:57:15.002-06:00apt,
well done,apt,<br />well done,Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-35940248926766908172011-07-12T12:52:46.543-06:002011-07-12T12:52:46.543-06:00it really entered my head
real nice poem
you are s...it really entered my head<br />real nice poem<br />you are so coolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-51890698992198002532011-07-11T17:27:12.567-06:002011-07-11T17:27:12.567-06:00Because of those few moments of shiny, it's ha...Because of those few moments of shiny, it's hard to let go.<br /><br />This was a very good piece.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-31675439795309476362011-07-11T13:42:12.318-06:002011-07-11T13:42:12.318-06:00A very thought-provoking piece.
Hope you find the...A very thought-provoking piece.<br /><br />Hope you find the peace you seek.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing.The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-30045949031303696452011-07-11T10:19:57.729-06:002011-07-11T10:19:57.729-06:00ride for a while, it is worthy,
most of the time, ...ride for a while, it is worthy,<br />most of the time, we need to stand on our own feet and walk.<br /><br />lovely poetry, thanks for sharing.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-31225467218708307492011-07-11T10:14:32.758-06:002011-07-11T10:14:32.758-06:00Yep. Sometimes you just have to get off and walk a...Yep. Sometimes you just have to get off and walk away. If the darn thing will slow down enough to allow you to do so.<br />Nice writing. I enjoyed this a lot!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3447541231998439757.post-83763784497919917572011-07-11T02:15:28.199-06:002011-07-11T02:15:28.199-06:00Sometimes watching the merry-go-round from the out...Sometimes watching the merry-go-round from the outside is actually more fun than being on the damn thing! *smile* Resonating words, fantastic imagery - as always!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com